check out my poem

I take one step ahead towards regret.
And find myself in a world of great fear.
A land that can make any one be stressed.
A place where thy own eyes experience tears.
I find myself in a world of sadness.
My face is burning in red hot flames.
My hands are still, froze, with pain and hardness.
My head looks down and raises up great shame.
It seems the sky looks down upon my pate.
The sun shines hard with brightness in the air.
But soon will darken and away goes faith.
I shake my head around and pull my hair.
Suddenly, I take another step, proud.
With infinite happiness i scream loud:
I made it out!!!

by: brokenheart


1 Comments

very good

by jessie - 2009-06-05 11:06:42

keep writing!!!

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